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X. P. Callahan's avatar

Your poem got jealous of my poem? Oh, I know the feeling, dear Fotini.

THIS POEM

Has more to offer than you might think, though not

much more. Admits to scanning other poems

with envy. Has stood before honest mirrors

and failed to slash its pathetic fallacies

but eyed its own wrists with sinister intent.

Having wept and fasted, having wept and prayed

in its servile aping of the Modernists,

has presumed to crash the poetic banquet,

only to be bounced, teary and ravenous.

Chairlifted to the summit of Parnassus,

has had to schuss down on its scrawny backside,

clutching a ski in each of its sad mittens.

Dear reader, if you’re still reading, you’ve allowed

this poem to waste your time. What have you done.

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Richbee's avatar

Yellow bulb flowers form.

Clouds overhead. Other bright lights below. Crocus saffron stamens raise hopes all not forgotten or carried away by rainy nights. Never too late for last minute for get me nots.

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