Two Lessons Learned by the Sea
I
The day was alight, the sky was stark blue,
the wind shedding hints as swiftly went by
of midsummer bliss about to break through.
Sipping my coffee I savoured some grains
a friend had brought returning from church,
full flavoured to mouth with sour refrains.
Lightly I pressed my feet on the ground
careful as not to step over ants—
no more dead on this day I vowed.
This land was turning forlorn, if only…
I thought, and trailed to the shore; there
to find, bathed in the salt, a small lonely
star who willingly came upon my hand.
Crawling on me and holding me tight
his twinkling points the colour of sand,
an odd-looking couple we floated in glee;
two worlds collided unforeseen became one,
but our fleeting affair was not meant to be.
I paid my respects and let him swim by—
the folly of time and its measure undone.
Some things are just meant to last for a while.
II
Forward the years, in some other place,
already September brooding on days
that wane in the season’s resolute pace,
animal-like I’m sprawled on the sand—
the haze of the evening and the cloudless sky
matching my mind as my body gets tanned.
Salted and spiced lying there sucking light
I stare at the sea with eyes turning blue
when a man appears and I barely catch sight
of his masculine hand that thrusts into water
and deceitful in stillness allures from the reef
a goddess who comes in loving surrender.
As Venus’ rise I watch from the shallows,
her eight limbs embracing the dubious hand,
I can’t help but shudder and think of the gallows
and the rest of the hanged who bask in the sun
in front of the taverns as trophies displayed,
waiting their turn to be put in the pan.
With dinner at hand, the man walks away
and a phrase I once read booms in my head:
life eats life—there’s no other way.
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This poem reminded me of the trickery of time, and of men, and stood me in turquoise waters lost in memory of starfish and joy. So many finely tuned phrases as exquisite and delicate as that deathly and duplicitous meal.
Paul Wittenberger once wrote "I always feel as if I’ve actually gone somewhere and come back after I read The Crow", which was a humbling comment of such kindness and encouragement, so I hope you feel similarly when I repeat those words to you. Brilliant stuff.
'The day was alight, the sky was stark blue'
'the wind shedding hints as swiftly went by'
'things are just meant to last for a while'.
'life eats life—there’s no other way'.
Love these lines Fotini. Nice rhythms in your early writing. I can sense how it's evolved.
I can also relate to the feeling of returning home from holidays. Who knows what comes next!