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Jonathan Foster's avatar

This poem reminded me of the trickery of time, and of men, and stood me in turquoise waters lost in memory of starfish and joy. So many finely tuned phrases as exquisite and delicate as that deathly and duplicitous meal.

Paul Wittenberger once wrote "I always feel as if I’ve actually gone somewhere and come back after I read The Crow", which was a humbling comment of such kindness and encouragement, so I hope you feel similarly when I repeat those words to you. Brilliant stuff.

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The Sea in Me    (Síodhna)'s avatar

'The day was alight, the sky was stark blue'

'the wind shedding hints as swiftly went by'

'things are just meant to last for a while'.

'life eats life—there’s no other way'.

Love these lines Fotini. Nice rhythms in your early writing. I can sense how it's evolved.

I can also relate to the feeling of returning home from holidays. Who knows what comes next!

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