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Jonathan Foster's avatar

Hear,

Those hefty bees

Doppling past

Nectar-fuelled

Over grass

Manically praying

To the last.

Listen,

Gentle one

Through the cacophony

To the gentle love

Of the collared dove

Beneath the carob tree.

I love this poem. The shyness, the understanding, the acceptance, the busy-ness. The cacophony...then the calmness, the being seen, the easiness. Accepted by the natural order for being just you.

If that's me in the dedication, then I'm floored. And very grateful. (If not, then I'll get my coat, as the say:)

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David Donoghue's avatar

Those first three lines are stunning. Their feel bulbous and packed full of life and activity like a busy summers day. Its so good.

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