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Fotini Masika's avatar

I tried to do my best :) Thank you, Bethel!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Your poetry amazes me each time! What you've done here with those complicated titles is beyond me. Would I want to rub shoulders with the absolute? This is what I am wondering about. Yet another band I am unfamiliar with. Thank you for the introduction.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Thanks Pilgrim! 🙏 A most idiosyncratic band, Ozric Tentacles - I love their songs as much as I love their name :)

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

That's fantastic and works really well. The song titles fit in absolutely seamlessly, to the point where someone reading this wouldn't even realise they were there, without being told. I break the rules every day myself. The important thing is being creative and having fun! Haha... 😎

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Thank you very much, Chris! The fun part is really important I think :)

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Treasa's avatar

This is brilliant. I think you need to release a song title poetry book.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Oh, we should make a collective one, all of us. Thanks Treasa!

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Treasa's avatar

Imagine! The field research would be such fun.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Clap hands!!!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

And thank you also for the restack! 🖤

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Awesome.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Thank you, Margaret 🙏

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Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Excellent job, Fotini - I'm now going to jump aboard the Eternal Wheel and head toward the Tidal Convergence. Rubbing shoulders with the Absolute is certainly a possibility!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Thank you very much, Paul. 🙏 Let's ride the wheel!

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Michael Edward's avatar

The rules of how to construct this poem, make it sound very hard to do! And yet, you still made such a good poem.

Bravo!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Thanks Michael! Sometimes the titles click together, you just have to be patient and to go through them many (many) times :)

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